1. Review the samples for writing a Literature Review and follow the outline.
2. The sentences are incomplete or read a bit choppy.
3. Delete words or phrases that are fillers or do not add value, e.g. “In that order,” “For purposes of further,” “An,” etc.
4. Where is the Research Purpose section?
5. Where is the separate section for the Research Questions?
6. Review APA citations and include page numbers.
7. Research Questions #1 and #2 are not sentences.
8. What is the Recommendation section?
9. The language needs to be more academic and less informal.
10. You need more comprehensive citations and narrative for each of the citations. Review your preliminary sources for more data.
11. This is a good start, but I recommend for someone to help proof your document for clarity.
Kindly, Dr. T.