Criminalisation of forced marriages
Include heavy analysis on relevant laws surrounding the topic, excellent statement of relevant laws, excellent coverage of issues, excellent application of laws, excellent evaluation, critical judgement and problem solving
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Focus on how and why the law was introduced, statistics on forced marriages, where its most popular, the difference between forced marriages and arranged marriages, statistics on forced marriages in the UK before the law was introduced and then after, comparison with statistics of forced marriages outside of the UK, whether it has decreased or increased overtime, organisations available which help raise awareness for the issue, why forced marriages are done , why forced marriages should be criminalised how it goes against human rights and the law behind that, Forced marriage protection order, forced marriage civil protection Act 2007, Family Law Act 1996, forced marriage Civil Protection Bill, what the UK government have in place for Forced marriages and how they are trying to reduce it, Welfare of children who get forced into forced marriages, Children Act 2004, Anti-Social Behaviour, Crime and Policing Act 2014, punishments in place for Forced Marriages in UK
including any relevant cases where necessary
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Use footnotes where information was copied from at the end of the sentence and then Include the source within the numbered footnote
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